Writing task

Hi everyone, this blog is about one of my writing tasks. This task was all about show not tell, we had to turn boring sentences into more interesting ones, 

It was hot

1. Sweat was dripping down my face while I was out in the boiling hot sun.

He was sad

2. Tears were rolling down her face as she was curled up in the corner in misery.

The man was stressed

3. The man was passing across the floor making a small draft.

The girl was excited

4. The girl was jumping up and down screaming with joy.

And we also had to write a short story using show not tell,

In the woods

It was a cold winter's day and I was just curled up in my blue sleeping bag snoring away. All of a sudden I heard a loud bang and my eyes opened as wide as they could go. I stepped outside my tent to see if I could see anything. There was nothing in sight so I just got comfy again back in my sleeping bag. But as soon as I got comfortable I heard the bang again. I thought nothing of it so I just went back to sleep, around thirty minutes later I heard it again, but it was continuous. So as fast as I could, I packed up all of my stuff and got to the car as soon as I possibly could.

Thanks for having looking at my blog, let me know if you use show not tell.