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Today I will be showing you my story that I have been working on during silent writing called THE BLACK SHADOW this is just a draft so there may be some mistakes,
Hope you enjoy.
Once there were four girls who were having a super fun sleepover and there names were Grace, Mereana,
Paige and molly.
At the sleepover they went rollerskating they watched movies and ate popcorn and Had lots of fun but all that fun ended when Molly’s mum said lights out, then they all pretended to go to sleep, but just as they turned over there was a big tall shadow quickly running across the room, Paige had a little peek around the corner but nothing was there so she quickly ran back to
Grace, Mereana and Molly.
They all tried to go back to sleep but they couldn’t so they all went to look around the corner but nothing was there so they watched another movie and tried to go to sleep again because they usually went to sleep in the
middle of a movie but it didn’t work this time.
They saw the shadow run across the room again and again and again so they followed it the last time it ran past, which was a really bad idea.
Thank you for reading I hope
you enjoyed reading my story. What was your favourite part?.
Thank you for reading I hope
you enjoyed reading my story. What was your favourite part?.
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